The article from Fox, entitled "Thousands of refugees rush into Croatia to find new route to Western Europe", was filled with informative facts that really explained the crisis in Croatia. However, when it is compared it to the article from CNN, it was clearly missing something.
The difference between the two articles was the way they were explained. The superior article entitled "Migrant Crisis: Thousands overwhelm Croatia" from CNN used very intriguing phrases that really grabbed your attention and described the situation much better. For example, the CNN article says, "Women were wailing and police tried to help children as masses of people pushed their way out of the holding area set up for processing," this is just one example of this article using extreme details and vivid adjectives to grab your attention.
The Fox News article had no details of a first person account, only facts about what happened. In this article, two paragraphs start with phrases such as "Authorities said," or "Croatian police said," rather than explaining the horror that the migrants were facing. Fox should have written about first person accounts of the crisis, in order to make the article more interesting.
Another way that the Fox article failed to meet this element of journalism, was failure to use visual aids. Visual aids such as videos or pictures incorporated with the article really help make it an interesting piece of news. While the CNN article used many pictures and a video, the Fox article used one picture at the beginning of their short article. If Fox had used more visual aids, it may have made their article more interesting and may have brought them closer to meeting this specific element of journalism.
Under the element "Make the Important Interesting", it says, "Part of the journalist's responsibility is providing information in such a way people will be inclined to listen." Overall, this article written by Fox News failed to do so. Therefore, it does not meet all ten elements of journalism.
Read both articles here:
http://www.foxnews.com/world/2015/09/17/thousands-migrants-rush-into-croatia-in-new-route-to-western-europe/
http://www.cnn.com/2015/09/17/world/europe-migrant-crisis/index.html
The Fox News article had no details of a first person account, only facts about what happened. In this article, two paragraphs start with phrases such as "Authorities said," or "Croatian police said," rather than explaining the horror that the migrants were facing. Fox should have written about first person accounts of the crisis, in order to make the article more interesting.
Another way that the Fox article failed to meet this element of journalism, was failure to use visual aids. Visual aids such as videos or pictures incorporated with the article really help make it an interesting piece of news. While the CNN article used many pictures and a video, the Fox article used one picture at the beginning of their short article. If Fox had used more visual aids, it may have made their article more interesting and may have brought them closer to meeting this specific element of journalism.
Under the element "Make the Important Interesting", it says, "Part of the journalist's responsibility is providing information in such a way people will be inclined to listen." Overall, this article written by Fox News failed to do so. Therefore, it does not meet all ten elements of journalism.
Read both articles here:
http://www.foxnews.com/world/2015/09/17/thousands-migrants-rush-into-croatia-in-new-route-to-western-europe/
http://www.cnn.com/2015/09/17/world/europe-migrant-crisis/index.html